Review by Daniel
Peretti, Memorial University.
Paul Cornell
and Rachel Smith. Who Killed Nessie? Avery Hill Publishing, 2025. https://averyhillpublishing.bigcartel.com/product/who-killed-nessie-by-paul-cornell-rachael-smith-preorder
The early study of folklore (in the
nineteenth century) focused heavily on collecting traditions and classifying
them into various genres, and further on developing indexes of those genres,
which included narratives such as legends, myths, and folktales. A century of
this scholarship followed in the footsteps of Jacob and Wilhelm Grimm, whose
works on legends (German Legends, 1816/1981) and myths (Teutonic
Mythology, 1835/1966) are not quite as well known as their fairy tales. The
differences between these genres have never been settled to the satisfaction of
all the scholars who work in the field, but they have attained a general
currency outside academic work. Among the various narratives we can find
stories of creatures such as elves and other hidden folk in Scandinavia,
fairies in the British Isles, mine, forest and household spirits in Germany,
and other assorted goblins. As ethnographic inquiry took root in the new world,
Asia, and Africa, creatures such as Bigfoot, the Yeti, and the various Yokai
became common knowledge. The stories of these beings, once documented from
local folklore, entered popular tradition in a range of discourse that
encompasses television, cinema, and literature—including comic books. The
generic terms employed by folklorists to mean very different types of stories
began to function, in popular culture, more or less identically, connoting a
traditional origin and a sort of nebulous history that only vaguely attaches
them to specific cultures, and only then at national levels. What has formed
over the end of the twentieth century and the opening decades of the
twenty-first is a pantheon of creatures, often now called cryptids, that are
generally accepted to be part of human heritage, and appropriated by creators
into Euro-American fiction. Think of the Vertigo series Fables (Willingham
et al. 2002-2015) or the Shrek (d. Adamson and Jenson, 2001) animated
films.
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Fig. 1. The Beast
of Bodmin Moor explains the global distribution of the cryptids to Lindsay
during the first night of the convention.
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So it is not surprising to find a
story in which the Loch Ness Monster exists alongside the Wendigo, or the
Cyclops talking to Bigfoot, or a jackalope next to Baba Yaga. A wyvern
consorting with Slender Man seems slightly incongruous, but there they stand in
the pages of Paul Cornell and Rachael Smith’s Who Killed Nessie? a
crowdfunded graphic novel on Zoop acquired by British publisher Avery Hill for print publication. The
story might be best described as a cozy mystery, with a limited—though
large—cast of characters (see Fig. 1). The book is relatively short at just
under 100 pages of story material, with a pared-down art style and simply
rendered colors that fit a middle-grade aesthetic, despite telling an adult
story.
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Fig. 2. Lindsay
Brockle arrives at the Wisconsin hotel to begin her new job.
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Who Killed Nessie? is set
during a cryptid convention at an isolated motel on a lake in northern
Wisconsin (see Fig. 2). Lindsay Grockle—the human protagonist—arrives at the
hotel as a new employee, only to be left alone to tend to the convention
attendees because the other employees do not want to handle the strangeness of
it all. At first Lindsay thinks that the convention-goers are wearing costumes,
but soon she learns that the people staying at the hotel for the weekend are in
fact the cryptids themselves. She learns the truth of the matter when the Beast
of Bodmin Moor (a figure of English legend) intrudes upon her sleep to get her
to solve the murder of the Loch Ness Monster. Lindsay at first thinks she is
dreaming, but her acceptance of the existence of the cryptids takes only a couple
of pages. Initially, she insists she can’t help, but a Hippodrake convinces her
of their need, so she takes the case. From there, the story follows the
structure of the mystery, with suspect interviews, red herrings, and several
twists.
Some liberties have been taken with
the cryptids. For example, the Beast of Bodmin Moor is, by all accounts,
black—thought to be an escaped panther or puma; in Who Killed Nessie? it
takes the form of a tannish, shape-shifting cat with a bushy, striped
tail—perhaps a British Shorthair. The Hippodrake, which appears in the comic as
a serpentine horse with horns and an ectoplasmic mane, does not seem to be a
genuine cryptid at all, but rather a type of dinosaur. But that’s the
folklorist in me searching for authenticity where it isn’t necessary. The
popular tradition is inclusive, not exclusive. It can include characters from
the Wizard of Oz as well as Tengu from Japanese folklore. The story plays
loosely with recorded tradition. The Cyclops, for example, claims to be part of
the story of Jason and the Golden Fleece, so readers are left to wonder if
Cornell accidentally conflated the Argonautica with the Odyssey,
or simply wanted the reference in the story for a joke: Jason got fleeced.
A lot of the mythology is played for
comedy. The unicorn slut-shames other females. The minotaur confesses to eating
the sacrifices in the labyrinth, but only because there were no vegetarian
options. Lindsay uses a squeaky toy to bribe Cerberus so she can get into the
underworld. Much of the humor is also sexual in nature, which is what makes
this an adult comic despite the absence of graphic depictions of violence or
sex.
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Fig. 3. Despite their common lot in life, the cryptids don’t all get along. The Yeti is frustrated with the fairies for many things, including eating Yeti-flavored potato chips. | | |
There are rules to this world—for
example, upon death, the monsters vanish and reappear in their homeland. Though
Nessie dies in Wisconsin, her body washes up on the shore of Loch Ness in
Scotland. There’s backstory, too, about how the convention started in the first
place. Human encroachment caused the cryptids to seek help. Fairies (see Fig.
3) employed magic to keep the creatures hidden, but the creatures had to sign a
contract in order to be made “mythological” or “legendary,” ostensibly so that
human beings will “respect [them] again” (53) According to one fairy, the
creatures go out of their way to be noticed, creating what she calls parasocial
relationships with humanity.
The creators develop a system for
how the cryptids’ existences work, allowing Lindsay to explore suspects who
reveal that system in bits and pieces along the way. The system incorporates
many academic terms that have diffused into popular culture. There’s a mummy
with no recollection of his living identity; he calls himself an archetype,
caught up in the fairy spell, which effectively makes him immortal. He tells
her that the cryptids that might be real animals can be killed, but “the more
archetypal creatures” will come back to life (64).
Cornell also incorporates an
awareness of the processes of folklore. The Jersey Devil, from the east coast
of the United States, keeps changing form and complains about its conditions:
“You just try livin’ without a proper legend of your own,” it says, “with
everyone thinking you’re somethin’ different!” (45). Variation of this sort
results from the fluidity of oral tradition, since there is no canonized
version of any story.
Myth, fairy tale, and legend
converge in a popular tradition that postulates a fictive world in which all of
them are real. Cornell and Smith use this trope, which has become more and more
common across media, perhaps an inevitable outgrowth of popularized academic
work such as Joseph Campbell’s The Hero with a Thousand Faces (1949).
Most likely, Cornell and Smith are using literary renditions of these
characters, but despite the presence of a literary or cinematic tradition, Who
Killed Nessie? demonstrates that the stories of these popular characters,
like the folklore from which they arise, will keep changing.
Bibliography
Campbell, Joseph. The Hero with a Thousand Faces.
Princeton University Press, 1949.
Grimm, Jacob, and Wilhelm Grimm. The German Legends
of the Brothers Grimm. 4 volumes. Translated and edited by Donald Ward.
1981.
Grimm, Jacob. Teutonic Mythology. 2 volumes.
Trans. James Stallybrass. Dover Publications, 1966.
Willingham, Bill, and others. Fables. DC Comics,
2002-2015.