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Tuesday, November 22, 2022

Book review: The Mud and the Mirth; Marine Cartoonists in World War I by Cord Scott

reviewed by James Willetts

Cord Scott. The Mud and the Mirth; Marine Cartoonists in World War I. Quantico, Virginia: Marine Corps University Press, 2022. https://www.usmcu.edu/Outreach/Marine-Corps-University-Press/Books-by-topic/MCUP-Titles-A-Z/The-Mud-and-the-Mirth/and https://www.usmcu.edu/Portals/218/The Mud and the Mirth_web_1.pdf

This is the Marine Corps University Press’ first book of comics analysis and criticism, focused on the pre-first world war and wartime cartoons published by - and about - the Corps. Available for free as a .pdf, the Press show an admirable commitment to public-facing history with the publication of a wide assortment of archived cartoons. It’s a lavishly illustrated monograph, featuring over a hundred full color and black and white images, many of which are made widely available here for the first time.

Scott begins his analysis of military cartooning with an interesting point of departure from typical approaches. He notes that analysis of wartime cartoons usually begins with the patriotic commercial comic books, propaganda, and cartoons of World War II. Indeed, this is where Scott himself began his earlier work, Comics and Conflict, which looked at military cartoons from WWII through to the War in Iraq. In The Mud and the Mirth, however, Scott looks backwards, making a case that the cartoons and imagery published between 1914 and 1918 are part of a longer continuity. He argues that this framework allows readers to observe the “succession of cartoons that told of the Marines’ life well after World War I, into WWII, Korea, and even to the present day.” (4) The cartoonists, publications, and illustrations of the Marine Corps during this period laid the foundation for future military cartoons and comics. These materials are often neglected, to the detriment of broader conversations about military cartooning, wartime propaganda, and explorations of the Marine Corps’ internal culture. Likewise, Scott suggests, the authors and artists who created the sequential strips of the in-house publications have largely been overlooked both by historians of the Corps, and those focused on the development of sequential mediums and comics.

The Mud and The Mirth is structured around the Marine Corp’s pre-war and wartime publications. Scott first addresses pre-war depictions of the Marine Corps in the internal magazines Recruiters Bulletin and the Marines Magazine. These in-house publications specifically addressed the roles and daily lives of Marines stationed around the world. Scott acknowledges the influence of these early publications on crafting imagery that would continue to define the Corps going forward. However, the focus of the book is primarily placed on the cartoons of Stars and Stripes. Over two thirds of the book’s content – and the vast majority of the images contained within – cover the artists and cartoons of Stars and Stripes, published by the Army, but a multi-service newspaper.

These sections are illuminating. Almost all of Pvt. Abian A. “Wally” Wallgren’s Stars and Stripes cartoons (in the Army newspaper) are reprinted,* including all of those from the magazine’s page seven which was most commonly used for the Marine’s illustrations. Wallgren was one of the two people of the newspaper’s art department. Scott explicitly makes the case that the work of these servicemen artists demands further research and analysis. The books greatest triumph, then, is how it skillfully opens up the Marine Corps’ archives for further study. Images from Stars and Stripes, Recruiters Bulletin and Marines Magazine demonstrate the global reach of the Marine Corps and the wide array of activities Marines were involved in. The illustrations in Marines Magazine showing American perceptions of Haiti seem particularly significant and could easily be the main focus for an extended chapter on presentations of race in these cartoons.

Indeed, Marines Magazine and Recruiters Bulletin in particular would benefit from further analysis. While these are not Scott’s primary focus, it would have been nice to see more attention paid to the two pre-war magazines and they place they occupied in the development of military cartooning. A secondary author, or even a curated anthology, could have expanded on Scott’s argument and added deeper analysis of the Marine Corps’ cartoons of the First World War. This represents a missed opportunity from a smaller academic press. While the 20 pages Scott gives to cartoons from pre-war magazines represents almost a fifth of the total length of the monograph, it is not enough space to fully explore these in the same detail as Stars and Stripes.

Nonetheless, this is a useful and necessary correction to the established literature. Hopefully this will somewhat reorient historians of the Marine Corps as well as scholars of war comics and military cartoons. It leaves open room for new and ongoing avenues of research, and for others to take up Scott’s initial inquiries and develop his arguments further.

Monday, November 21, 2022

IJOCA 24-1 is shipping, and here's the Table of Contents

 Almost 800 pages! Also available electronically!

IJOCA Vol. 24, No. 1 Spring/Summer 2022

Editor’s Notes
John A. Lent
1
Ishinomori Shōtarō: Teaching the Art of the Manga Panel
Ramie Tateishi
8
More or Less Hearing: Representations of Deafness in Marvel Comics
S. Leigh Ann Cowan
35
Satire in the Wake of “Woke”: A South African’s Woes
Compiled by John A. Lent
82
Comics as Resources of Meaning in a Prevention Campaign for Covid-19 in Mexico: Susana Distancia and Escuadrón de la salud [Health Squad]
Citlaly Aguilar Campos
107
Kaiser, King, and Caricature: Franz Joseph in British Cartoons, 1848-1916
Richard Scully and Mathew Paterson
126
“Who Is This Gallant Girl of Greatness?” A Chat with Brian Biggs about My Hero
Mike Rhode
159
Vilma Vargas, Female Political Cartoonist: A Rarity in South America
John A. Lent with Geisa Fernandes
182
The Names and the Nameless -- People Who Make Up the City: A Reading of Harsho Mohan Chattoraj’s
Kolkata Kaleidoscope
Abinsha Joseph and Smita Jha
207
“Not on Your Tintype”: The Emperor of Japan as Depicted by William Gropper
Paul Bevan
223
Poetry Comics as Artifact: The Visual Poetics of Sprawl
Felix Cheong
245
Cliff Dwellers in Hogan’s Alley: R. F. Outcault and the Ashcan School
Michelle Ann Abate
255
Pride, Pain, and Punishment: Cacofonix as a Model of Resilience in The Adventures of Asterix
Lisa Mansfield, Jessica Stanhope, and Philip Weinstein
287
Metafiction and Ecuadorian Graphic Novel: The Case of El ejército de los tiburones martillo (2019)
by Fabián Patinho
Alvaro Alemán and Eduardo Villacís
310
Qahera: The Webcomic, Not the City: Reception and Popularity
Hayat Bedaiwi
327
Discussing The Art of Living with Grant Snider
Mike Rhode
340
It’s Like You’re There: Experiencing Sounds, Giongo, and Gitaigo in Skull-face Bookseller Honda-san
Kay K. Clopton
368
An Essay
We Are Nothing
Michel Matly
385
Early Chinese Portrayals in Western Political Cartoons from the Mid-19th Century
Harry Jiandang Tan
399
Unique Beijing Comics Coffee House and Its First Exhibition: A Picture Story and Mini-Catalogue
Xu Ying
434
Mobility of Monstrous Mermaids in Manga
Patrick Ijima-Washburn
448
Similarities and Differences Between Mexican Friki Culture and Geek Culture in the United States
Nadiezhda Palestina Camacho Quiroz
480
Comic Art Academic Monograph Publishers
compiled by Mike Rhode
499
Maia Kobabe in Conversation: Banned Books, Queer Stories, and Gender Queer: A Memoir
Kathleen Breitenbach
510
Contemporary Rebellion in Tsutsui Testuya’s Yokokuhan
Motoko Tanaka
533
The Manhua Specialized Press in China: 40 Years of Reform and Opening Up
Laetitia Rapuzzi
549
Introducing SG Cartoon Resource Hub, a New Site for Exploring Singapore Cartooning
CT Lim
576
Anime as Witnessing--“Violet Evergarden” and the Trauma of Memory
Barbara Greene
579
Goodbye, Bob (and thanks for all your words about pictures!): A Far Too Brief Appreciation of the Life and Times of Robert C. Harvey, Comics’ Premiere Pundit
Daniel F. Yezbick
597
Defining the Graphic Novel
Jakob Dittmar
608
An Essay
Odd Taxi, Animal Farm, and Satirical Distance
Brent Allison
623
Long Answers to Simple Questions: An Interview with Ben Hatke
Jason DeHart
631
Meet Sergio Peçanha, Washington Post Visual Essayist
Mike Rhode
638
A Chat with Ted Anderson: “I Work in My Head”
Mike Rhode
645


Book Reviews
Superheroes and Excess, an Oxymoron: A Review Essay - Eric Berlatsky
653
Jeremy Dauber. American Comics: A History, by Charles Henebry and Lee Williams, p.661.
Catriona MacLeod. Invisible Presence: The Representation of Women in French-Language Comics, by María Márquez López, p.662.
Nancy Pedri. A Concise Dictionary of Comics, by John A. Lent, p.666
Felix Cheong and Eko. In the Year of the Virus, Felix Cheong and Arif Rafhan. Sprawl: A Graphic Novel, by Cheng Tju Lim, p.668.
Rich Johnson. The Amazing Spider-Man: Web-Slinger, Hero, Icon, by Chris York, p.670.
Damien MacDonald. Anatomy of Comics: Famous Originals of Narrative Art, by Cord A. Scott, p.672.
Katherine Kelp-Stebbins. How Comics Travel, by Kenneth Oravetz, p.676.
Terence McSweeney. Black Panther: Interrogating a Cultural Phenomenon, by Jason D. DeHart, p.678.
Mark McKinney. Postcolonialism and Migration in French Comics, by Elke Defever, p.680.
Jim Lee and Paul Mounts. The Uncanny X-Men Trading Cards: The Complete Series, by Cord A. Scott, p.682.
Norah Lucía Serrano, ed. Immigrants and Comics: Graphic Spaces of Remembrance, Transaction, and Mimesis, by Elke Defever, p.687.


Exhibition Reviews

A Review Essay
Chicago: Center of the Comics Universe, by José Alaniz, p.691.
A Review Essay
Good Humor, Bitter Irony, by Tony Wei Ling, p.709.
Festival report
European Comics Festivals Return to Angoulême and Haarlem, by
Barbara Postema, p.717.
A Review Essay
Fumetto Opens Up Again in 2022, But Underwhelms, by Wim
Lockefeer, p.731.
A Review Essay
Curator’s Notes on “Icons of American Animation,” the Exhibition,
by Robert Lemieux, p.740
Curator’s Notes on “Jim Morin: Drawing and Painting,” An Exhibition of Political Cartoon Drawings and Landscape Paintings, by Martha H. Kennedy, p.751.
R. Crumb, Aline Kominsky-Crumb, and Sophie Crumb: Sauve qui peut! (Run for Your Life), by Gerald Heng, p.753.
“Painting with Light: Festival of International Films on Art.” National Gallery Singapore. July 1, 2022. Suenne Megan Tan, executive director, by John A. Lent, p.764.



Wednesday, November 16, 2022

Book review: The US Graphic Novel by Paul Williams

reviewed by Paul Levitz 

Paul Williams. The US Graphic Novel. Edinburgh University Press, 2022. $29.95 (Paperback). ISBN 9781474423373. Critical Insights in American Studies series. https://edinburghuniversitypress.com/book-the-us-graphic-novel.html

 Paul Williams’ survey of The US Graphic Novel suffers from his lack of commitment to a definition of the subject.  The boundaries of the forms of graphic literature and a strict categorization of the various niches and their overlap is a taxonomy that has yet to achieve any general agreement in the academy or among practitioners. However, in order to advance the study of this evolving and interesting form, it is necessary to make at least a hypothesis of definition.  Supreme Court Justice Potter Stewart’s classic comment, “I know it when I see it” seems even less adequate to define the graphic novel than the pornography he was referring to when he made the remark.

 As studied through various disciplines, the concept of a graphic novel changes.  Williams at times seems to define it simply as an illustrated text of a certain length (going as minimal as 48 pages, which while typical of the European album has rarely been considered definitional in the United States) in a book format.  Lacking boundaries, he digresses into considering works like Don Freeman’s It Shouldn’t Happen in which there is no integration between the illustrations and textual material as a graphic novel.  The subject matter is serious, and if we apply the lens of defining the graphic novel by criteria of literature which considers the human condition, it would certainly be a worthy step in the evolution.  On the other hand, considered as part of the nascent field of comic studies, it is largely if not totally irrelevant.

 In my worlds, I accept two definitions: as a practitioner or when teaching the business of publishing, the conventional marketplace wisdom: the graphic novel is any content in a book format that utilizes the techniques of sequential storytelling where the art and text (if any) are integrated rather than segregated.   When teaching the graphic novel as literature, I look to content that rises above genre to tell non-formulaic fiction or non-fiction with the potential to touch the soul, and is packaged in a book form, again using integrated sequential art and text.  This definition removes my old friend Arnold Drake’s It Rhymes With Lust from the evolution, and marks Harvey Kurtzman’s Jungle Book as the beginning of the ‘modern’ American graphic novel.  In both situations, I focus on work first published in America, not because the rest isn’t important, but to avoid over-complicating the analysis and burdening it with difficult to prove assumptions about access creating influence.  I place no importance on these working definitions beyond their utility in my work or teaching and defer to the academy to eventually define terms better…but the absence of any tentative definition in Williams’ book seems a critical flaw.

Where Williams is most interesting is when he places the evolution of comics and the graphic in context with other media and an international perspective, acknowledging that developments in the United States are not the only ones relevant to this process.  Various works that he explores at some length such as Miné Okubo’s Citizen 13660 deserve more consideration than usually given, and his perspectives are illuminating.  Developed as a theory and focused on, this could have been a very worthwhile book.  As presented, it mixes with a great deal of material that has already been more deeply explored by many others and distracts us by a biased perspective (is it really more relevant to the evolution of the U.S. graphic novel that Nick Drnaso’s Sabrina was longlisted for the Booker Prize than that Art Spiegelman’s Maus actually was awarded a Pulitzer Prize?).

There’s an intrinsic challenge in conflict between the history of a media form (comics), its near-relatives (those works which utilize some of the classic tools but not all, or not in the classic manner), and other forms that have their own evolution (illustrated books).  One of the most joyous aspects of the way that current technology has permitted the breakdown of these boundaries is the explosion of barely categorizable works (is Lauren Redniss’ Radioactive to be considered a graphic novel when it is non-fiction, certainly not comics, and utilizes visual tools outside of the conventions?).  The success of the graphic novel as a marketing term encompassing a diverse range of visual literature, journalism and non-fiction is one of the fascinating components fueling a creative explosion in the United States and elsewhere, along with the empowerment of artists being able to reach audience with fewer or weaker gatekeepers, vastly reduced or eliminated preproduction expenses, and access to software enabling easy merging of images. 

The subject matter Williams covers is fascinating, and he finds topics where he offers insights not frequently duplicated in the scholarly literature.  But the overall quality of the volume is dramatically limited by his lack of definition.  To quote Anne Enright, an author who did win the Booker prize that Williams respects so much, “All description is an opinion about the world.  Find a place to stand.”

Monday, November 14, 2022

Cartoonists Rights Network International's Fall fundraiser

There are three cartoon-based charities* that I recommend that defend freedom of speech or help cartoonist's lives. CRNI takes on the international cases - the people who might be disappeared, sued, or assaulted for their opinions. We've seen the chilling effect of book bans and attacks on graphic novels, cartoonists and publishers in the US over the past few years, and it's time to put some money into pushing back against the forces of repression. I'm donating $100 as soon as I send this post - Mike Rhode
*I also support CBLDF and Hero Initiative


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US DONORS: CRNI is a registered 501(c)3 non-profit organization, federal tax ID 54-1982242. Your contribution is tax deductible to the full extent allowable.


Holiday pledge drive 2022 – target $2,500

Free Expression doesn't come cheap. In fact, multiple cartoonists have lost their lives in their pursuit of that right. Others have been assaulted and abused, criminalized or imprisoned, and an increasing number are displaced from their homes.

Our mission is to defend these vulnerable cartoonists, including material aid for those in emergencies. Now more than ever we can only meet their needs with your help. When you donate, you show support of our work and your commitment to human rights and free expression.


Please note online payment is by far our preferred method, and the only option for supporters overseas. Those in the USA who still wish to donate via check or money order may do so, made payable to "Cartoonists Rights Network International" at PO Box 7272, Fairfax Station, VA 22039

Thursday, November 10, 2022

Book review: The LGBTQ+ Comics Studies Reader: Critical Openings, Future Directions

 The LGBTQ+ Comics Studies Reader: Critical Openings, Future Directions. Eds. Alison Halsall and Jonathan Warren. Jackson: University of Mississippi Press, 2022. 355 pps. ISBN: 9781496841353. https://www.upress.state.ms.us/Books/T/The-LGBTQ-Comics-Studies-Reader

Reviewed by Christopher M. Roman

Queer comics have been receiving important scholarly attention for the last decade or so. With the recent entry in Keywords for Comics Studies (2021), essays in various comics studies collections, along with the issue of American Studies edited by Darieck Scott and Ramzi Fawaz (2018), as well as book length studies of queer comics creators like Alison Bechdel and Howard Cruse, queer comics studies has slowly amassed a scholarly weight. With Justin Hall’s edition of queer comics, No Straight Lines: The Rise of Queer Comics (2021), Andrew Wheeler’s Shout Out (2019), and Matt Bors’ Be Gay Do Comics: Queer History, Memoir, and Satire (2020), queer comics have even been anthologized. Even Marvel and DC now publish yearly queer comics anthologies during Pride Month. An excellent addition to the queer comics discussion comes in the form of Alison Halsall and Jonathan Warren’s The LGBTQ+ Comics Studies Reader: Critical Openings, Future Directions. This collection of essays is comprehensive and showcases scholars’ attention to the diversity of queer comics from manga to webtoons. As I outline below, this collection is mostly successful in its presentation of queer comics scholarly work and provides both a sense of where queer comics scholarship has been, and, more importantly paths for its future.

The collection is divided into four parts. After an insightful introduction written by Halsall and Warren, Part One contains essays that look at queer comics as a queer commons defined as a space where queer people can connect through shared political commitments. Queer comics instill this kind of shared citizenship through critique and subversion of heternormativity. Michelle Ann Abate’s “Rude Girls and Dangerous Women: Lesbian Comics from the 1990s” examines the rise of queer comics aimed at lesbians during the late twentieth century. As Abate argues, these comics gave rise to queer women’s community building and provided a space for critique and queer anger at the normative and oppressive politics of the time. Tesla Cariani’s “Condoms Not Coffins: 1950s-1990s American AIDS Comics as Collective Memory” looks at comics as a kind of queer archive as they represent the AIDS crisis and how it affected queer lives. Magaret Galvan’s “Of Anthologies and Activism: Building an LGBTQ+ Comics Community” compliments Cariani’s essays as this essay, too, examines comics dealing with AIDS. This essay, however, focuses on two comics anthologies, Strip AIDS and Strip AIDS USA, that functioned as social justice anthologies by bringing together queer comics creators often on the front lines of the AIDS crisis. Section One ends with an interview with queer comics scholar Ramzi Fawaz conducted by the editors. The interview is a wide-ranging discussion touching on queer comics, Marston and his creation Wonder Woman, how comics expand people’s ideas of the possibilities of queer relations, and even the comics superhero group the Fantastic Four. This is a great way to end this section of the collection as the thread running through this interview is how queer comics build community.

Part Two of the collection examines the global community of queer comics. The editors appeal to the accessibility of comics as a way to underscore the wide reach of comics. The editors bring together articles that look at the development of queer comics in Germany, France, and Japan. This is the shortest section of the collection which undermines the goal of this section: to show just how global queer comics are. However, with essays that only deal with three countries, this section of the collection would have been better served with essays that looked at more parts of the world. There is no mention of Central or South America or that of work from South Asia, for example, even though Bishakh Som’s work has received critical attention. In the Introduction to the section, the editors mention ArtQueerHabibi, a queer Middle Eastern artist who publishes on Instagram, but it would have been more representative to have included a few more essays that would have widened the global scope. In Susanne Hochreiter, Marina Rauchenbacher, and Katharina Serles’s “Queer Visualities-Queer Spaces: German Language LGBTQ+ Comics,” the writers provide a succinct essay recounting the transformation of queer comics in German-speaking countries after World War II. They trace queer comics as rising from feminist and lesbian media through its flourishing in the 1970s in gay lifestyle magazines to mainstream comics work in contemporary media. In Keiko Miyajima’s “XX, XY, and XXY: Genderqueer Bodies in Hagio Moto’s Science Fiction Manga,” Miyajima uncovers trans identities in Moto’s work. Moto’s work celebrates gender-fluidity and transformation. Continuing to look at manga, William S. Armour’s “An Exploration of the Birth of the Slave Through Ero-Pedagogy in Tagame Gengorah’s Pride,” explores sado-masochism in Tagame’s celebrated work. Armour argues that Pride can be read as a how-to book for those who may be interested in slave/master play. In Edmond (Edo) Ernest Dit Alban’s essay “Gay Fanzines as Contact Zones: Dokkun’s Adventures with ‘Barra’ Manga in between Japan and France,” Alban looks at the trans-cultural influence of Dokkun’s gay comics. Alban argues for examining the amateur comics section of LGBTQ+ comics for the ways they create community and queer spaces away from larger comics industry concerns and obstacles.

Part Three collects essays that explore different kinds of queer selfhood as represented in various queer comics. The editors celebrate the diversity of expression found in queer comics and highlight how queer representation is always in process. In the first selection of this section the editors include an interview with Justin Hall, editor of the landmark queer comics anthology, No Straight Lines, conducted by Hillary Chute. The interview recounts Hall’s career in comics, his work as a professor of comics, and his journey in bringing together No Straight Lines, as well as discussions of important queer comic creators like Howard Cruse, Brad Rader, and Dianne DiMassa. The second essay works in conjunction with Hall’s interview as Matthew Cheney’s essay, “Activism and Solidarity in the Comics of Howard Cruse,” also celebrates the work of a pioneer in queer underground comics. Cheney’s essay looks at the importance of Cruse’s comics as a form of activism for the queer community. Alison Halsall’s “Canadian LGBTQ+ Comics: Intersections of Queerness, Race, and Spirituality” turns to the diversity of Canadian queer comics as they address the vastly different socio-political contexts found across the country. In “BLK Cartoons: Black Lesbian Identity in Comics,” Sheena C. Howard examines single-panel comics published in BLK Magazine, a magazine aimed at the black, queer community during the late 1980s and early 1990s. In these single-panel comics, Howard finds a celebration of Black lesbians that reflect the deep and complex lives of these Black women that were not represented in other media. In Lara Hedberg and Rebecca Hutton’s “Goldie Vance: Queer Girl Detective,” the authors write about Hope Larson and Brittany Willard’s comic/graphic novel Goldie Vance for its representation of a Black, queer female detective who queers traditional expectations of gender roles for girls. This section ends with selections of Alison Bechdel’s Dykes to Watch Out For.

In Part Four, the editors bring together essays that examine how queer comics both make queerness visible as well as how queer comics constitute a scene, shared histories, customs, and community. In Jonathan Warren’s “Reading Comics Queerly,” Warren looks at how comics, though they may not at first glance represent queerness, become queer through readerly attachment and decoding of subtext. In remus jackson’s “Better a Man Than Dead?: Radical (Trans)Masculinities in Comic-Zines,” jackson looks at self-published and DIY comics for the ways they build queer community. jackson take as his subject trans-autobiographical comics that challenge cis-masculinity. The editors next include an interview with Jennifer Camper that they conducted in which they discuss Camper’s queer-community building work and her influential queer comics. In “Conceiving the Inconceivable: Graphic Medicine, Queer Motherhood, and A.K. Summer’s Pregnant Butch: Nine Long Months Spent in Drag,” Sathyara Venkatesan and Chinmay Murali examine comics that queer motherhood, arguing that motherhood itself is a queer practice. Finally, Lin Young’s “Pixel Fantasies and Futures: Narrative ‘De-othering’ in Queer Web Comics,” turns to webcomics for ways these queer comics leave behind the queer struggle with heteronormativity to explore queerness as optimistic futurity.

This collection is well-worth a cover to cover read. Each author explores a different aspect of queer comics both in terms of queer history, as well as in terms of queer theory. It is exciting to see this anthology in the world and its influence on queer comics scholars will be profound.

             

Wednesday, November 9, 2022

IJOCA 24-1 print edition corrections

 The Vol. 24, No. 1 print issue shipped to subscribers Monday. Readers will notice a couple of errors made by the printers after I read the proofs.

      1. All pages are numbered opposite where they are supposed to be, relocated near the spine.
      2. in the article by Richard Scully and Mathew Paterson, "Kaiser, King, and Caricature:  Franz Joseph in British Cartoons, 1848-1916, on the bottom of the first page (IJOCA p.  126) the word 'parentheses' appears just before the first endnote. This looks like an editorial or technical glitch, as it was not in the original submission. As the journal had already gone to proof, it could not be corrected.

-John Lent